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for What the Wind Carries

by flintywoman

person bebe
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry but, how are we going to enjoy this story if we have to pay to read it? Why put it adult fanfiction net if we can't read it free like everything else here?
person Kaay-chan
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I tried to read this on your website but it wouldn't let me past the third chapter. Can't you just please re-post the entire story on here? It isn't fare for those who don't want to pay the 7 bucks to join the site.
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! You are quite versatile, aren\'t you? From futuristic space stations to post-war Wild West, your smut is good! :)
Seriously, though, this was a really moving story - I love the fact that you\'ve focused this so much on emotions, and quite realistically. Please continue to write stories like these for the world needs good writers like you!
Greetings from Dany
person uncouthkitten
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think that I\'ve ever reviewed any author as much as this, seem to be quite hooked on your writing. I didn\'t read this originally as I\'m not usually a fan of american historical fiction, how wrong was I!!!! It was great, certainly not the shoot \'em up, yehaw, cowboy story I was expecting. Instead a delicate balance of characters and emotion, possibly less plot driven than your other stories but I\'m not too sure that too robust a story line wouldn\'t have detracted from the deft refinement of the personalities and have been too confusing with the back plot of Sam and the Civil War. Masterfully written - another gem from your pen.
person keyonnamc
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful…absolutely beautiful. I love this story…I say that a lot, but I have a thing for this story. I finally read all your stories…and they were all remarkable. Your stories were full of sadness, love, compassion, raw passion, angry, despair, suspense, and angst; were all things that worked into your advantage. You are an astounding writer.
I really dislike Tom’s father and any other character that has cause pain and trouble for Tom and Alex. You have an extraordinary story.
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schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O...Kay? I suppose it was good, I\'m just not an Old West story person. ^^ The wording was splendid and the characters were absorbing but I just didn\'t find it quite so thrilling as I\'d imagined. Ah well. I\'m just horribly spoiled on weird sciFi and mythical (and not so mythical in my opinion) creatures. ^^ But please, write more stories! I like your writing very much, it\'s very good and I\'m hounding people that they MUST read your works. Honest. I shanghi-ed my friends system today and brought up Heros and Ghosts and said that she HAD to read it and if she didn\'t I\'d be very angry. ^^ Write more! More!

-Karie
person Chari
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good plot line for a fic held together by smut! very kewl!
person Memme
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay.. okay... so I love it. And I don\'t suppose I care so much if it\'s all fluff and cute. But it\'s the ... strong man and how he\'s so easily overcome.. or how he allows himself to be overcome!!! Woo. What a rush!

And this is the official \"LOVE IT!\" post thingie. Because bed is just around the corner. Noice JOB!
person Brekke
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOw, this took me an entire day to get through! I just wanted to let you know that your warnings at the begining of your story are un-needed as you write wonderfully! Thank you very much for making such a wonderful and perfect story!

Brekke
person jjkitty
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definately, your best story.
It was absolutely wonderful.