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for Little one

by kateridemonica

person Mika Sorano
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there again! I\'m finally caught up on the whole story. I can\'t wait for more! When\'s Jess gonna come back? I wanna see Rene and her together. Do I foresee a possible coupling that Kateri will allow some sort of marriage for? ooooo update soon!
person Mika Sorano
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Poor Rene! (I think I\'ll be reviewing more often now. ^_^) Okay, so does Camion love Jess or did he just feel lust for her those few times? Man, love triangles (squares even, too) are so fun to read about and write. *sigh* every story should have them! You\'re an amazing writer, great characterization! It\'s something I don\'t find very common around this site.
person kat
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, wow nice writing and girl what are you doing for extra curicular activites, and em i hope she wasn\'t tied up with rope.
person Shai
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I\'m back, and boy have you written a lot since I last checked. Well, update...
person Kat
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kicks the bad man in the golllies, cool story tho.
person Sara
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent new chapter. You\'re very skillful with character development, which makes the story just that much more interesting. I can\'t wait to read about Rene and Jess. Hurry up and post soon!
person BZLF
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was different.. Interesting, but different.
Should we reviewers be expecting more of such in the future however?
I myself don\'t mind the M/M, and it wasin\'t to badly writen, either.
Keep updatin\', please, KaS.
person Mika Sorano
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure if you\'re still getting reviews for this story. I stumbled across this site a few months ago and have been looking over stories. I normally don\'t read the longer stories because they don\'t keep my interest. This one, on the other hand, does. I haven\'t reviewed for the story until now because I\'ve been very pleased with the plot and process of the going ons. But now. Oh WOW. I almost felt like crying myself, throwing myself into Jess\' place at that table and having to watch (part of) that display. She really is lucky to be with Kateri, she\'s such a kind mistress. (Heck, I\'d like her as my own. Shh.) I\'ve been reading your story a couple chapters a night here and there for about a week now, and I\'ll surely be on speed read now to find out what happens to Snell. I just want to see him dead. A poor excuse for a man.
person jess
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg your story is AMAZING. I just read it all today. I can\'t wait for you to write more. I\'m really excited. I want to write a story myself but I haven\'t gotten up the motivation. That is just incredible though. i will check everday for updates
person l\'etje
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was very good, keep going and post soon
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