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for Little one

by kateridemonica

schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it ya must update it
person :)
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dis is really good. i like the way it still has a story in it. i mean i hope it still has a story.
person anonymous
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i gotta say, i\'ve been reading this story since chapter 12, and i think ch28 is one of the best yet. its probably my favorite scene of jess since the first 3 chapters, i thought how it started with jess kicking her feet was absolutely adorable! shes so cute! one question though: how much time has passed since the first chapter? how old are kateri and jess now? and what of the three sisters (especially little anna), will we be seeing any more of them in future chapters? this is one of the best stories on here (and i\'ve read a lot of them) keep on writing!
person BZLF
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Didn\'t think Rene was the type to Screw and Run like that. Hmm.
person Mika Sorano
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, the end of this chapter makes me think of a homecoming dance back in high school. The guy was cool, good dance partner, but when the song was over, he suddenly disappeared. How rude. I can\'t believe Rene just left Jess there with out saying a single word before or after. Don\'t leave me hanging! What was his action all about at the end?
person Kat
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay how come he ran off huh huh tell me, ~puts on My bossy hat~ I want to know. More please a great and enchanting and well plain hot chapter.
person Sara
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew, that new chapter is hot!! I loved all the teasing with the feather and whatnot. Man, that was just what I needed. ;-)
person l\'etje
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i found this very good very hot but also very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person BZLF
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull! Beautifull! Bravo!! I rate this chaptor a 12/10! Worth Mastubating to!
person Joee
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Love the story keep it up!

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