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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Reads latest chapt(e)(o)r**less then halfway thru gets hard-on*\"My rating:Five/Five, or Ten/Ten. Thank you for providing us with yet another wonderfull chapt(e)(o)r. I hope this story, and your other, keeps going as well as they are.\"
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this soon. It is very good.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for another great chapter!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa-your second lemon and first f-f, don\'t worry you are doing just fine. Keep it coming when you can.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. Better then the first. Needs to be a bit longer tho. Hardly enough to.. *coughMasturbatecough* using. >_>,<_<,>_<.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far. It seems to have a bit more plot and thought to it than some. I like the Empress so far, and I like Jess so far. I liked that the Empress wasn\'t one to force the girls into anything. I hope you update again soon. I will be here to read it. ^_^ Just send me a quick e-mail or something so I\'ll know. Otherwise my next review might be a bit late.
Good job!
~CR
Good job!
~CR
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m interested. continue. my one critiscism is the paragraphs are too long, but that\'s quite easily fixed.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really, really good! please continue asap!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Boo! Add next chaptor! Don\'t leave it like that!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome beginning. I\'ll be looking for more. Keep me hanging.