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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chica, i is proud
nicely done
adios
nicely done
adios
schedule
May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfect not one thing wrong hope u update soon
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alex: Cool update
Kai: Ya it was good.
Alex: Try and make it longer next time.
Kai: i am going to and steal your books now that your done with them
Alex: HEY! i\'m in the middle of the first one!
Kai: Ya for the 3erd time!
Alex: .....fine....
Kai: thank you!
Alex: Update soon! and try to make it alittle longer next time!
*waves. alex punches kai in arm and runs off, kai catches alex and licks her cheek*
Alex: EWWW! gross!
Kai: well thats what you did to me! just paying you back!
Alex: i would have rather a punch in the face...
Kai: Ya it was good.
Alex: Try and make it longer next time.
Kai: i am going to and steal your books now that your done with them
Alex: HEY! i\'m in the middle of the first one!
Kai: Ya for the 3erd time!
Alex: .....fine....
Kai: thank you!
Alex: Update soon! and try to make it alittle longer next time!
*waves. alex punches kai in arm and runs off, kai catches alex and licks her cheek*
Alex: EWWW! gross!
Kai: well thats what you did to me! just paying you back!
Alex: i would have rather a punch in the face...
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. This is pleasantly different from the normal fare here. I look forward to reading more, because you tease and leave me wondering where you are going with the story. Nice job! 4 star! ~essvan!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic and sweet. Keep up the good work. ~ess
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! A little bit of a kinky mystery here! Nice! ~ess!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue please please its good
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter keep up thr good work!!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew, I literally sweating here, this is so hot! And to think I almost passed on reading this.
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Take ye time and write when ye can. Good update like always.(Allthough not to long).