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for Little one

by kateridemonica

person Tessa
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great;no, awesome story!! I really like Kateri;and Camion is cool to! Those masters that Jess used to have are real fucking bastards, I hate men that rape women/little girls..but please continue this story, you\'re a brilliant writer!
person kai
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter.
*yawn*
im so tired....
person BZLF
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'not very long since the last one!\' Wait... Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?? The... End... !?
This was one of the best chaptors yet, and i am very happy with it and its ending.
You have done a wonderfull job, KaS, Milady, so please, don\'t end it so soon!
My rating: Length;2, Sex;6, Good Ending;2, Total rating:10.
I hope your other story also turns out as good, or better, then this one, KaS.
Until next time..~BerserkZero-LifeForm.
person kat
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey to the more and now I\'m greedy and want more again. But still loving it its cheared up a very boring day
person brittney
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot chapter....really hot...i like how you keep introducing new characters...it makes your story unpredictable and much more enjoyable. Keep it coming.
person Kat
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more of this story I was just getting into it when it stopped
person Katie K
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, how\'d I miss this story? this story is awesome, I love it so much. Please update soon!
person l\'etje
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was very good let her mistress teach her somethings
keep writing and post soon
person BZLF
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most interesting. Keep up the good writing, please, KaS.*bows respectfully in return*
person BerserkLife
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll be remembering this chaptor for later use when i can\'t get on the Comp.
As usual, another wonderfull chaptor, and a nice length to it, too!
Good job, and please keep up the great work.