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for Little one

by kateridemonica

person shai
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh huh uh huh, keep it coming... Oh, I have to work for it? Weeelll, I luuuuv your story, I can\'t wait for more, you\'re queen and emperess of the world - oh and you\'re in my recomended reading, how\'s that? Now gimme some update!
person Kat
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I beg can I have 2 more chapters because this is great and I want more, and can I have a dress like Kats please?
person Sano
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is keep writing. i freaking love it!!!
person Kai and Alex
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
It was really good, i mean we liked it.
ummm...im really board and Alex is watching FMA.
*yawn*
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
person samurai demon
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! all i have to say is keep up the good work.
person BZLF
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. I await the next update.
person anonymous
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha i liked chapter 3 and 11 the best but the writing in between is really good too, it just seemed really natural. i love jess reactions to everything especially in 3 and 11, jess is so cute! poor thing lol
person brittney
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what can i say besides hot. I don\'t if it was better with the Lord or her other slave woman, but i really like it with just jess and Kat.., so keep it coming and keep it hot.
person kat
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice and a little diffrent. anyone else had to try rember the name of the guy your with, lol keep it up I\'ll be back
person Firered
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s like, I\'m not sure I like the story, I\'m just happy to read it and let it supplament my perverted imagination. So yeah, i guess I like it. Please write more, very soon...