rate_review Reviews

very emotional but very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye

I am in love with your story. It\'s by far the best story I\'ve read on this site. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon; my life is practically dependent on your story. I check for updates like five times a day. As sad or creepy as that may sound, I can assure you it\'s a compliment. Your character development, writing style, and descriptiveness is absolutely incredible. The sex scenes are fucking hot as hell, and as beautifully written as can be. This story deserves 5 billion out of 5 stars, both in erotic content and storyline. Please continue this story for as long as you possibly can. Introduce new characters, new twists, more flashbacks, whatever you can, as long as you keep this story going. Bravo!

-Sara

I\'m addicted. I love Jess and can\'t wait to see what happens next. MORE!!!

that story was good i hope that you continue thus is one story that i\'ll check up on

Good. Keep going.

that was sick....
that was really sick!

ewww

in my opinion I think you should just continue it becuase in lenght it seems fine for where it\'s at and well update soon its good.

I didn\'t beat you up, but i do like the idea of more and if you feel the need to end it here then do so and carry on in a diffrent way.

Hey, you can continue this as long as like, I\'ll keep reading... I sympathize, I only have one completed story and it\'s only thirteen chapters, and has a sequel, so who can\'t commit to their stories? Anyway, I\'d like you to continue this, though preferably not chapters like the last two, so...

Oh, and I look forward to an extremely bloody and painful death and castrazation sometime in the next few chapters, and you know of who. Extremely bloody and vicsious, please, I\'d suggest an idea but I\'m saving it for one of my one stories, maybe.