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for Little one

by kateridemonica

person Morgan
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaahaha. gotta love rene. that was awesome.
person kat
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word, cool. More please
person HeLrAiSeR32
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome fic! keepz up the good work. hurry up wit da next chappy cuz itz a great fic.
person BZLF
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp* Three chaptors since i last reviewed! Crap, i\'m falling behind again!
I found the 17th and 18th chaptors interesting, but i enjoyed reading the 19th chaptor.
You are doing a wonderfull job and i can only look forward to what will happen next.
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always, looking forward to the next chapter. as always, you need to make maller paragraphs! Say it with me, spaces!
person Nina Necros Soren
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this fic since the first time it was posted, and i have to say that even though i have waited a long time to review, I still love it!!! i love it with all my heart and I mean this, I have never read a story on this secton of AFF.net before and reviewed. i have only reviewed a few times in other fics and this is the longest praise for a fic I have ever written. I will leave thisnow thank you for being a very good writer!!


----Nina Necrcos Soren
person Sara
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve returned to review once again. Awesome new chapter. I really hope Jess regains Kateri\'s love. Hell, I almost feel jealous of Marcia for her. Also, all that shit people are saying about the six-year-old girl getting raped is bullshit. I thought it made the story much more interesting. Its purpose wasn\'t erotic, it was atmospheric. Am I right? All it did was further develop the scene in which they were living and what kind of people they had to interact with. I thought it added a good bit of quality to the story, so everything those asses are saying is wrong. Keep writing! This story is incredible!
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah? What is the meaning of this! is it just supposed to be a weird twist?
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just saw this reveiw, and to the person who said how sick it was that this little girl got raped by men way older than herself, what\'s that supposed to mean? Like, if the rapists were only six years older, it wouldn\'t be sick or something? just mentioning...
person anonymous
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story but the one thing that just makes me digusted is that you wrote about a little six year old girl getten
raped by men that are way older then herself.I look forward to reading more chapters. (even if that one chapter was disgusting with the kid)