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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s so short....
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KYA!!! More! I like the way this is going! Please have more action in the next chapter!!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start...update soon please
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! It\'s good, but it\'s rushed and PLZ can you press enter after a different person speaks, for example
\'Hi,\'
\'Hello, how are you?\'
\'I\'m fine,\'
It\'s makes it SO much easier to read. Happy Writing!
Em x
\'Hi,\'
\'Hello, how are you?\'
\'I\'m fine,\'
It\'s makes it SO much easier to read. Happy Writing!
Em x
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii ^^ I love this plot!
Keep on writing! =D
Keep on writing! =D