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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a trully well written piece of work. all the emotion was perfectly conveyed and the story played on as if i were watching a movie. i really liked it, great job.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Very intersting fic, i wonder what will happen next (I\'m in chapter 2 so far...)
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, dark and lovely with a shining light of hope. Or at least that\'s what I think.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story,but i dont get how she doesnt have any powers of her own ....or maybe she does you just havent written them in yet.Ok iv just confused myself.but i still like it though.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh she does have powers cool.i was also wondering were you got the poems from did you create them yourself?
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was very well written but, is it the end of the story? Does it end at chapter five?
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey christina! i\'ve only gotten to chap 3, but i wanted to let u know that i think its awesome so far! im really gettin into the character and i want to know more about her history. i especially like the this line: My heart has been shattered like crystal, and a thousand glittering pieces fall away into the blackness of time. you\'re so good at creating the perfect imagery! cant wait 2 read the rest!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A heartwrenching tale. Your description of the emotions Maya feels is spot-on. Her mood is easily read by anyone who cares to try. I know more than one survivor of rape.( The ugliest crime in the world, I think.) Maya is not getting the therapy she needs and if it continues this way, she will succeed in her suicide attempts. Alorkin