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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. hope you continue. you left the story at a cliff hanger. i am waiting for more to come in the future! good luck!
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s quite good so far!! Please continue, don\'t abandon like soooo many other stories
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahha... the story has twists in it\'s plot. this old fashioned love story is actually quite refreshing. i like very much so far, update soon!!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jack\'s story doesn\'t make me feel any better. I still dislike him greatly. And if his new wife was pregnant with his child? I still think Elizabeth deserves more. She shouldn\'t have given in to him. The child would only remind Elizabeth of the child she lost, giving her great pain. Maybe you can give her amnesia so she can move on, have no memory of Jack?
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it better not be his child. cuz if it is, it\'s over btwn elizabeth and jack. elizabeth doesn\'t deserve any of this
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how could he remarry even after he knew she didnt cheat on him,
and the baby was his! poor elizabeth!
oh yeah he thought she was dead!
thats so bogus of him to still fuck her,
really him cheating on his other wife, something he accused elizabeth of doing!
omg, you have to update soon!
and the baby was his! poor elizabeth!
oh yeah he thought she was dead!
thats so bogus of him to still fuck her,
really him cheating on his other wife, something he accused elizabeth of doing!
omg, you have to update soon!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this! especially the last twist in chapter 3! please update soon!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ugh. jack disgusts me. he\'s married? and he just had sex with liza? and he has the audacity to accuse liza (even if it was four years ago) of cheating on him? ugh. right now i\'m finding him repulsive. liza needs to move on, and this time it\'s jack\'s turn to mourn and suffer. argh. i hate him.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, please update!!!
I love where this story is going.
I love where this story is going.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, update SOON! its a really great and intersting story right now, don\'t leave us hanging!