AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Crime Scene

by amistillill

schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this. It's brilliant. Very personal, you've detailed a great character here, right down to this great line:

Behind the mystery food, I find a pack of chocolate pudding. Score.

The Dodge Stratus. Preferring a fucking poncho to the "janitorial smurf" get-up. Good God this is a great story.

Going on my fave list. A pity it only has two reviews. Perhaps you'll care to share the other stories that you mentioned? Let me know if you do.

~The Amazing Enthusiasto~
person christine
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tragic brilliance.
person cukid9
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first I want to say that the thing that made reading this story great was that I was reading it while the most vicious thunderstorm we\'ve had this year was booming outside at 1 AM. It really set the mood ^_^

I was laughing so hard about the chocolate pudding (\'trying to find a fucking spoon\' lol) and the whole going into Blockbuster all bloody asking for Dirty Dancing.
I can\'t believe no one has reviewed this! It\'s great. Perhaps no one appreciates dark humor as much as I do, especially when it\'s done so well.

If you ever do get the other stories about this character done to your satisfaction, I\'d love to read them.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?