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by FarAwayEyes

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schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A truly excellent piece of writing. It has quite a 'Lolita' feel to it, as well as being moral and sensitive. It's nice to see a story which doesn't just revert to meaningless sex and unreal situations.

My congratulations on writing such a superb narrative.
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really interesting. I always look for storys that are different in nature, and this definitely fits. I\'m glad to see other people think of strange things as well. Good Job.