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by ComplexedMale

person LaRieaux
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this is unique. However you still have errors...and it still short. You should try writing something a little longer okay, edmond?
person Bulma16 (haven\'t logged in)
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. Camaro sent me to read your poetry and I have to admit, I really enjoyed it. Yeah, it\'s short but that\'s how I like my poetry. Plus, I like the emotion you portray in just a few lines. I liked this one and the one about the girl who doesn\'t know you like her. Nice job ^^