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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope it stays Lium x Daniel !!!! and not Lium x Alton (yuckyyy) I like the first pairing :D
you write well!
you write well!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg wait. You\'re the author of that other awesome slash series - alton x nathan! NO WONDER IT SOUNDED FAMILIAR! wooo lol you\'re such a good author. I rarely come to this side of aff but dude, your writing is so cool. i\'m waitin for the next chapters!!!! update quickly ehhh!!!
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute! I love how it ended with Daniel\'s POV. At first I thought that Daniel had seen the ring and thought that Liam was proposing to someone else. Instead it was just a hug that freaked him out. Poor baby needs to have an ego boost. I really enjoyed the stories about this couple. It was just...cute! lol
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Yes! YOU BROUGHT IN ALTON AND NATHAN!
That was beautifull done, as well as the part with Daniel seeing Alton and Liam together...
--sighs-- Sorry for the odd writing and choppy review....I\'m trying to finish the next chappie of the story I promised and my eyes are crossin\'
Wonderful job hun and back to my story!
Apollo
That was beautifull done, as well as the part with Daniel seeing Alton and Liam together...
--sighs-- Sorry for the odd writing and choppy review....I\'m trying to finish the next chappie of the story I promised and my eyes are crossin\'
Wonderful job hun and back to my story!
Apollo
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! i read your valentine\'s trilogy and i must say, i enjoy every second of reading it! i usually scan thru stories and skim through their plots but once in a while some will make me sit up and take notice enough to read word for word carefully. yours is one of em. Daniel and Liam are so sweet...
i was wondering tho, if daniel\'s 6\'3\" and a bottom, how tall does that make liam???
i was wondering tho, if daniel\'s 6\'3\" and a bottom, how tall does that make liam???
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I just read all 4 current chapters and...wow! They were wonderful! Liem and Daniel are so good together. And I loved how you threw Alton and Nathan into the mix! ;) I love those two, too! I can\'t wait to see the next update! Daniel needs some good old pampering! Great job!
**Zephyr**
**Zephyr**
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I don\'t normally review for anyone. I was kicked out of a webgroup for not reviewing. But I\'m reviewing because I think that this story is seriously sweet and I can\'t wait until you update again. I love this, with the little angsty-ness and lots of love and a side of humor. It\'s a great story, and I found no grammatical or spelling errors when I read it. This is well-written and totally addicting, and not many stories like this one can be found. I enjoyed this a lot and wait eagerly for your next update!!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my...i really liked this. so nice! and liam is *not* gay..he just likes daniel. heh.
wonderful!
wonderful!
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All right, so you lived up to your end of the bargin...I suppose I aught to go do my part and write another chapter, huh?
Well, we\'ll see what I come up with!
Apollo
P.S. - Wonderful lemon, and I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF at the end of the restaurant scene!
Well, we\'ll see what I come up with!
Apollo
P.S. - Wonderful lemon, and I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF at the end of the restaurant scene!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good!