rate_review Reviews

Great story, I can\'t wait to read the next chapters!

i just wanted to let you know that the first half of chapter one is something i shared with all of my friends. because its just that easy. to get lured into a stranger\'s car is one of the most dangerous parts of growing up innocent and naive. i\'m very glad you wrote it in a clean enough way that it could be shared.

also \"I can remember when I had wished for things to be different, when I had wished to be different. Now I just want to be on the other side of the glass. It was a lot safer being on the inside looking out. There is no security on the outside.\"

that got me thinking. i\'m wondering how many people have commented on that particular phrase.

*roar* kevin (insert teeniebopperscreaming right here)
ok, enough of that, let\'s try to be serious:
i think you\'re a very good writer -writing about sex but combining it with a very good story.
your characters don\'t seem to polished but almost real and that\'s one of the cool things about your story

i hope you\'ll keep going and will update soon :D

I thought it was great. I really can\'t wait to read more!

your story rocks please update as soon as you can i can\'t wait to read more bye :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

For the love of God, seperate your paragraphs! Please! All clumped togeher is a pain in the ass to read. Overwise, this story is absolutely awso,e.

You are a very good writer, and I love your story, I like that its something to read about, focused on sex but not entirely to take the thrill of the story out, thanks for the good reads.
Was wondering if you could email me when the next chapter is finished,
would very much apreciate it. Update asap, please cant get enough of this story.
^_^ Edward is very hottness.

incubi are always male. if the apparition were female then she\'d certainly not be an incubus, but a succubus.

will this continue? the plot\'s looking quite good.

are you gowing to update if so please do soon