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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Humn... Please update soon. i like this story.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I hate to sound all stupid an lame but I the only word that really fits this story is...is... OMFG I LOVE IT! *cough* ok that was more than one word but I think you get the idea. I\'m not normaly into lemons, but to me, the plot an the characters are enough to get me hooked *cough* (the lemons were VERY nice too thou *nods*). Please, pretty please with a cherry on top keep writing this story? I can\'t wait till you put up the next chapter. ( literally i cant wait. I check back every day ) Your writing is just that addictive.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot, cant wait 2 c more, :D i lyked it wen Kevin was embarrased, so cute~
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love your story!!! i really do. you write it so well and oh its so wonderful. you cant help but practically cling to it and want to know more. ^_^ i hope you update soon!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT story so far! I can\'t wait for you to update. I have a few notes that I\'d like to share with you, a few discrepencies and such that I have found. Nothing major, but something that i think will improve on an already great story!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... im in love you need to up-date soon... and bring back that vampire he seemed cool enough... this girl cant do any thing normal can she... lol well up-dates soon please
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most impressive. Please continue.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I must say that after reading your whole story at once, I am nothing if not totally impressed! I absolutely can\'t wait to read more! I don\'t know where you got the idea for this story, or what inspires you, but you\'ve most definately got what it takes to be a best seller! As far as the songs go from Chapter 8, I\'m not entirely sure Bilamos \"has\" an entirely Spanish version, though I vaguely remember hearing one of his songs that was. I think I\'m thinking of Rhythm Divine. I have his very first album (listening and checking right now...) It IS Rhythm Divine that\'s all Spanish... Dang... oh well... As far as the other song goes, you are right, it\'s called \"Every Breath You Take\" by The Police. I have the song, and love it very much. Anyway, I\'m not too sure what else to say, other than keep up the awesome writting and I\'ll most definately keep reading!!!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story hahaha
luv the characters, the fantasy in it luv everything lol
luv the characters, the fantasy in it luv everything lol
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool chapter.