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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can thank Camaro for introducing me to your poetry.
I honestly liked this poem. It was \"sensual\" and honest in itself and touched upon the POV of the person speaking in a way, that you literally felt the passion they felt for the one they long for. Very good job!
I honestly liked this poem. It was \"sensual\" and honest in itself and touched upon the POV of the person speaking in a way, that you literally felt the passion they felt for the one they long for. Very good job!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huh. Well, it\'s fiery and passionate, I\'ll give you that. I don\'t know if I like the underlining \"I love you but I want to bend you like gymnist barbie and fuck you raw\".... I don\'t know. I think the narrator is confused. I think he\'s a raging ball of hormones.. one minute wanting to love someone, the next, wanting to \"put it to em\' dirty like\".
I think the poem tells me that this isn\'t love... more like a sexual fantasy for someone who likes the IDEA of love yet has no real concept of what it is. I like this poem because I can dissect the meaning... it\'s kind of like asking a question.. where\'s the line between love and fucking? I like it. It\'s unique to me because it\'s complex yet short.
Camaro
I think the poem tells me that this isn\'t love... more like a sexual fantasy for someone who likes the IDEA of love yet has no real concept of what it is. I like this poem because I can dissect the meaning... it\'s kind of like asking a question.. where\'s the line between love and fucking? I like it. It\'s unique to me because it\'s complex yet short.
Camaro