rate_review Reviews

When I got done reading this I was left with the feeling of it being \"unfinished\". I really didn\'t get as emotional over this as I\'ve Been, maybe you should proofread this one a bit and see if you can go into deeper and more complex details about the emotions of the speaker. I\'m no poetry expert myself, but I know what I\'m looking for when I read a poem, and I think this one is missing something.

That\'s sad. No.. really. I was almost touched by this poem. It seemed a lot more realistic to me than the other. Like... I don\'t know how to say it. It\'s like the other poem was an artificial idea of love.. yet this one seems to hit it stronger on the head. A gradual, progressive love that sizzled out and died. It was sad. I feel that (and I can\'t believe I\'m going to say this because I hate poems) that they could be a bit longer to emphasize points more, perhaps even going into the history a bit.

Whatever the case though, this is a good poem.

Camaro

Awesome poem, I see why Camaro recommended it.