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for Innocence Lost

by MoChroi

person Sekre
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, you should continue this! If you ever do, send me an email ^^.
person Ravenna Night
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story sounds so awesome, except for the bimbo. the bimbo can die. don\'t think anyone will really care if she does. pls continue this story though!!
person Flamingolo
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an intruiging little ficcie! It\'s rare that I\'m sucked in so quickly without being aware of it, but this fic succeeds in spreading addiction with subtlety. Looking forward to more from you.
person SeanKen
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s great, I want more!
person buenagirl
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... what a wonderful start. I\'m in love with this fic already. Please... oh, very please... continue it. I can\'t wait to see what happens next... ^_^