rate_review Reviews

haha omg, a scheming sexy guy! this is twisted! love it.. it's really good and im telling my friends about this!

this is a great story! will sean betray again?

Oh, that was good. I was a little uncertain of the flow at first, since you put the reader in the position of being a character, but it was fantastic. Great job, and no complaints. I even think that the explaination of a backstory is unnecessary, since you have done a wonderful job of letting your readers know exactly what\'s going on in the story. I loved the ending especially! Wonderful, wonderful. Hope to see more from you!