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for The Pendant

by DietDirtyPop

schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this you have some great writing skills. I'm happy I found this story it's unique not the same ol smut story it has substance.
person RJaneyP
schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely deadly monster, I can't wait to read more about her, and read about her kicking supernatural ass! She even has a cool boyfriend too! Good start, please write more! G
person KeithXZ
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

It is good, but too short for my taste. To really develop the characters you need something longer.

But you could do more chapters. This would be a good start to a series.

- Keith
person Cameron
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic it is very interesting so far please update soon.