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Hello hello again!

Thanks to everyone that\'s emailed me! How delightful!! And thanks to everyone that\'s posted there and to everyone that\'s read this bit of fluff so far!! I checked, there are 24 chapters, I think, so we\'ve ten to go. So many of you have said such wonderful things, you\'ve no idea how happy that\'s made me. Was the trip to the club to transparent? Ohhh wait, don\'t want to spoil to much here in case people haven\'t read that far, so I guess, toss me an email if you\'ve any thoughts? Thanks again!!

Sarah

Awww! I feel so bad for Toshi, to have to see that...

I love the emotion you put into that breakdown he had. The reader can almost feel his pain and confusion and hurt. Brilliant. As always, wonderful job and I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter!!

**Zephyr**

I\'m at a loss for words. This is just too good! So, if from this point on I just leave jibberish for a review, take it as a compliment!

I\'m sooo happy you wrote more. I check every day to see if there is a new chapter. Please keep writing :)

Latest developements are so good! I was pleased to see Toshi give Sal a nice foot-to-the-groin, so well deserved. I like where you went with Mick and Toshi\'s reactions to the incident, how it wasn\'t the typical \'heroin\' is rescued and immediately screws the rescuer. The turns you took, while fitting nicely with the story, were unexpected and very anti-cliche. Looking forward to more!

yes.. another great chapter. keep it up

ooooo... i love the clubbing aspect of this ....i like ure plot ...keep on with the writing... go you!! :>

I knew you would hurt Mick at the club. So, will someone please kill Sal? Oh, I know! How about Alec arranges for Sal to disappear? Actually, it be kind of cool if all those people that are crushing on Mick could gang up on Sal and dance on him. Except I still think that would be a gentler death than Sal deserves. I think a spiritual/mental/emotional death would be good for Sal. He should be scared and mentally broken. Permently.


Can you tell that people like that seriously irk me? :) I guess my short and sweet review of this chapter is a simple: Go Toshi!

yay!! a lime/lemon thingi..... im so0o happy that my comp\'s fixed so i can read this!!!! sorry \'bout not reviewing for a while.... computer got so0o scewed... id click internet explorer... and microsoft word would pop up..... well anyway this is so0oo0o0o0o0o0o0oooooo0o0o go0od!!! more more more more more!

Very intreguing story! I\'m hooked and still have a good many chapters to go. Keep up the good work.