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EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no fair.... i NEED the next chapter!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! EVIL CLIFFHANGER FROM HELL!

EEP! I can\'t believe you left it there! You\'d better update soon or I might just die! Wow!

Okie, not that I can breathe again, I\'ll review this. I really loved this chapter. I never expected that for the attackers. Total twistiness! I guess I can\'t review well right now. I\'m still dying from that evil cliffie. PLEASE update soon!!!

**Zeph**

Well...I decided to stop waiting for updates here and just went to read the complete story on your site! :) So, I have just finished and I must say that is is a great story...Go Toshi!! *g*

i just stayed up all night reading this. i couldn\'t stop! this is one of the best stories i\'ve ever read on this site. please continue and update. i\'ll be looking for the next chapter, holding my breath.

Aww, my poor Toshi! That was hot and beautiful, but so sad and heatbreaking. Those poor wounded souls. I hope they heal soon. Great chapter!

Oh wow, what an awesome chapter! I have to say this was one of my favorites, as far as description and character development go; also smashing dialogue that drew me in easily and wouldn\'t let go until the end. I love the symbolism interwoven into this ficcie, very subtle, but very well done. Excellent job, can\'t wait for more.

this is so very very well-written, i\'ve enjoyed every chapter (in one sitting! my EYES!!). i haven\'t read much original slash because, to be honest, a lot of it is crap, but this...this world and these people you\'ve created are so fully realized that i found myself completely engrossed. the detail, the background/history, the emotional growth of two quite self-protective characters is all very well done. one aspect i especially liked is the idea of \'he smelled right\'. sounds kind of odd, but i think i know just what you mean. and the passionate way toshi reacts to the threats to mick\'s safety was awesome. oh, and andy\'s such a doll :D AND, you can never have enough leather pants in any good slash story!! that\'s my new battle cry: LEATHER PANTS!!!!!!!!!! hehe, excellent work, can\'t wait for updates!

Okay, I got impatient and went to your site to read the whole story. I have to say that I loved how everything ended. Well, except for the lack of a massivly long and painful beatdown for a certain character that I really, REALLY don\'t like. :) Although I expected most of what went on in the club scenes, I was completely surprised by how everything connected in Mick\'s case. Completely surprised and a bit squeamish at some parts. The story was abfab and I can\'t wait to read the western story!

Oh no V! Email me and tell me what made you upset?

Some of you are being so clever and finding the whole thing... lol Hope everyone is still digging this story, thanks for sticking with it and me. I\'m going to be tossing another chapter up after midnight and another tomorrow night. That means the entire thing will be posted here before next weekend! Whoo hoo! Enjoy enjoy everyone, you\'ve no idea how happy your kind words have made me!

Sarah

Oh, PS and whatnot, I can be reached on the aim aol chat thingy as zarya13 if that\'s easier for anyone...

Wow! Very nice! I love how you gave us the background information for Toshi\'s family and more about the I/S camps. It explained a lot. And Mick was wonderful today, letting Toshi just cry instead of trying to offer false comfort. It never works and I\'m glad you didn\'t go that route. Yet another wonderful chapter. I\'ll be waiting for the next! It\'ll give me something to look forward to after I go home tonight! ;)

**Zeph**