rate_review Reviews

I\'m so pathetic! Even though I\'ve read the whole thing, I\'m still reading the updates! I still think this story is beyond cute. Well, the scenes with Mick and Toshi alone are cute. Mick\'s family is great too. Think they\'ll adopt me?

Aaaaaah! Another evil cliffie...of sorts. I wanna see what happens next! Update ASAP!

Sorry. I\'m out of it. Another wonderful chapter. I\'ve come to expect nothing less from you! I can\'t wait for the next update! :-D

**Zeph**

awsome awsome....i love this story... it keeps getting better and better... and i like the regular updates...keep up the good work...:>

how i love this story. Every chapter I read i find myself wanting more and more (:can we say addict..) lol. Can\'t wait to read what happens next

Ya know...that\'s still a cliffie, but not so much as last time. Thank you for the update! And wow! What an update! This is almost too funny! Both of them so messed up like that and trying to be serious...wow.

You know, Mick\'s right. They could have a lot of fun with that venom later...

Anyway, yet another great chapter! Thanks for the fast, multiple updates! You rock!

**Zeph**

Awww! That was absolutely beautiful! Even in the middle of all of that, Toshi still felt like he didn\'t deserve it. I love how you made Mick wait until everything was worked out. Poor Toshi\'s been through so much, he deserves someone like Mick to take care of him. And Mick needs Toshi to take care of him in return. And I bow to you for making them wait. If they\'d made love in an earlier chapter, it wouldn\'t have been as sincere. This was, as always, absolutely wonderful! Now it\'s going to be twice as hard to resist the urge to read the rest! As always, wonderful job!

**Zeph**

ohh, ending a chapter with a cliffhanger like that is such a tease, i\'d be angry if you weren\'t so good about updating quickly. i just wanted to say, that this is definatly my favorite story at the moment and i really look forward to your chapter\'s each day.

Yeah yeah yeah, shoot me for chapter 17.... duck and cover and what not. When I wrote it, it was 3 am and I was too giddy to sleep and too tired to write more LOL Even I was left with a cliffhanger until about 11 hours of sleep. Don\'t worry, chapter 18 is up... thanks for reading everyone!

Sarah

three things... 1. thanks for posting again so soon... 2. you are so beyond evil to leave it like this... please post again... 3. i love the direction this story is taking... i have been thrown off by every new twist... excellent work... PLEASE post again soon...

Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow. Excellent chappy, outstanding lemon, just freaking outstanding. I love how you used it so masterfully for character development, giving us a better peek into the inner workings of Mick and Toshi without being blatant. *happy sigh* Each chapter keeps outdoing the one before as my favorite in this smashing fic. Eager for more, loving the consistent updates.