rate_review Reviews

This was amazing, absolutely amazing! I stayed up until 4am reading this fic and only quit for the night when I could not keep my eyes open any longer. I fell in love with your characters and with their world. You managed to incorperate some very yummy sex scenes into an excellent, tightly woven plot without sex becoming the main plot in itself. I honestly would have enjoyed this fic even without the sex, but I am really glad it was there -_^ Domo arigatou for writing this story.

Wavewalker

Hm,
wonderful story. Its incredible how you created a whole new world. The only sad thing is that I already miss all those wonderful characters.
Well I\'m following your other story too. So please keep going. (begs)
Bye

WRITE MORE. i love you. . . .

That was...easily the best, most entrancing, most interesting, best written, hottest, most sensual, most beautiful story I\'ve read in more than a year. And I read a LOT. I just read the whole thing in one sitting...I couldn\'t tear myself away! I\'m going to recommend it to all of my friends. Please keep writing!!

I...love this. The characters are wonderful, believible, and very well-developed. The plot is fascinating. The smut is beautifully constructed. The emotions, the description, the language...I could go on and on. Really, the best word for this is a simple WOW.

Wow, what a fun month it\'s been posting Blur for you all to read! It\'s certainly kept me moving on the next slash story I\'ve been slugging through, so many, many thanks to everyone that\'s read my story and enjoyed.

Zeph my faithful poster, thank you! I was actually waiting around at nights to see if you liked the chapter I tossed up. Sad, but true...

Chang Man and Moonglow and anyone else that might have asked, there may be a sequel. I have some rough ideas in my head. Thing is, I write for my own amusement and Toshi and Mick are very dear characters in my head. I don\'t want them to go away! So I\'m sure I\'ll be revisiting them eventually. I\'ve simply got to get this current one finished, but I\'ll post it as I go so look for \'What the Wind Carries\' which might have chapter one up tonight or tomorrow.

Arundel, I emailed you directly so I didn\'t have to spoil anything here... it was ahh Friday night or so. Not sure if you got it or not.

Eve, thanks on the real writer thing. I actually have Blur out at a publisher since Feb. 1st. So I\'m at, ah, day 78 of the 120 turn aroudn time for an answer. If it doesn\'t fly there I\'ll shop it somewhere else. How cool would it be to have pretty boy smut in a book form! Oooooooo :-)

Talyssa thanks so much! I know the summary sucks but how can you sum it up in two lines? I can\'t write stories under 50,000 words, how can I condense it into two lines!! Eeeps! I\'m open to suggestions if you got \'em. Email me and I\'ll change it. LOL For now it\'ll just have to float on word of mouth or fade away. I still think it\'s amazing that anyone else enjoys something I\'ve done.

Now, if only I could draw and get some pics of Toshi and Mick making out..... drools into the sunset.

Sarah

This story was so amazingly good! I want to review it a hundred times so that your number of reviews go up, you deserve to have a lot of reviews. There are a lot of stories with almost as many reviews but none of them are actually GOOD like this one. The summary of the story wasn\'t particularily enticing, so i didn\'t start reading this story til late but i\'m glad i did. I think you need a story summary that really sets this apart from the others.....its so much better than a lot of similar sounding stories on this site. I\'m actually really sad taht its over, i hope you\'re working on other stories or you have others to share here!

i loved it. s their going to be a sequel

OMG (panting heavily)! You are amazing! I read through the entire story in like two days and my heart would not stop beating. You have a gift, you should seriously consider becoming a real writer or something. I came to this site expecting hot gay sex, and I found much more than that. Thist story is so well constructed and beautifully written, your descriptions of events and things are phenomenal! I have read thousands upon thousands of AU slash stories, and this is the best! I love how you moved the story with the characters, and they are all so well constructed. It was as if I lived in the world they lived in, it was as if I was right beside them when all this happened. Beautiful! Truly a masterpiece!

*sniff* My last review...

Much as I hate to see the end of this beautiful story, I have to admit that it was appropriate. As with the rest of this story, the ending was absolutely wonderful. This is the best story I\'ve ever read on AFF.net, without a doubt. I can\'t wait to see where you go with your other story! Wonderful job. Seriously, have you ever thought of trying to get this published? You should.

Thank you for this wonderful piece of literature!!


**Zephyr**