rate_review Reviews

hey!! This story was awesome!!!! I loved it and would welcome any sequels that you write. :-). Please keep up the EXELLENT work.

^_^ Wonderful story! You write so well, leaving you at just the edge of your seat for just long enough! Thank you for the wonderful story!

I am speechless... This story is so so awesome! I have read it over and over again. I simply adore it! Will there be more? Such a fantastic story! Thank you!!

God this has to be one of the best stories I\'ve vere read, ever. And I AM counting published works. It\'s just so beautifully written and the characters are so captivating. And, yeah, the smut is hot ;)

Just one tnsy bit of CC, I noticed that a LOT of the time you used \'than\' when you should have been using \'then\'. It one of those annoying things that spellcheck doesn\'t catch :)

LOL. Oh man, I stayed up all night reading this fic, too. And into the day. And now I\'m all cracked out and sleep deprived but very happy and content. What a wonderful fic! Your world was original and detailed and totally interesting. I think the night when Mick takes Toshi\'s \'virginity\' is one of the most intense and well-done sex scenes I\'ve ever read. The perfect balance of smut and emotion.

I\'m really excited to hear you\'re pursuing getting it published... I think with some editing it could definately be professional material. Yay for spreading the love of slash!

Now on the What the Wind Carries! ... well... after some sleep....

yaYY!! This is such a great story! I love the whole mutation theme ^__^ There were a few typos that made reading a bit difficult, but the whole story made up for it ^_______^ keep it upppppp!!!!

that was awsome. I usally dont review but i\'ve reviewed both of your storys and there both awsome. Keep up the good work... Your one of (if not) the best writer on AFF in the original catagory. Your an awsome writer dont let anyone tell you diffrent.

Aawww!!! What an adorable ending!!! ^___^ I absolutely loved this fic -- very original idea, and wonderfully written!!! Your details and imagry are wonderful, and the characterizations! OMG, I don\'t know where to begin!!! I totally feel as if I know your characters and live in their world, and honestly, I wouldn\'t be surprised if I met them walking down the street one day!!! (Or riding on a horse, depending on the situation, lol.) I also think it was wonderful that you had a lot of angst, etc, thoughout the story(ies) and rather than having the characters meet and then immediately have sex, you wrote an involved story where their relationships built up to that point. And then you didn\'t have them do nothing else but sleep together for the rest of the fic, but simply changed their relationship to fit with their new lifestyle, as it were. Hmmm.....I\'m not making a lot of sense, am I? *sigh* It\'s late, what can I say? ^^ I guess what my point is is that you made the relationships very realistic, and thus the sexual encounters between the characters meant so much more then they would have otherwise. That, and the sex scenes where artfully worked into the story line rather than the story being \"slapped on\" around the sex scenes. Very profesionally done!!! ^___^ As a matter of fact, the only thing that bothered me in this fic was that you wrote \"than\" several times when the word should have been \"then\", but that was easily overlooked. ^___~ Oh, another thing: I read \"What the Wind Carries\" before this one, and I was pleasanty surprised that although your writing style was the same (duh ^^ ), the feel/story line of the fics was completely different. You also made up completely realistic (yet fictional) characters/worlds/species/histories/etc. in this fic, while your other one was based on the \"real world\" and American histoy. Both are indications of true talent, and I hope that you continue to write stories (or books...books are good...) in the future! ^___^ So keep up the good work, and thanks again for an enjoyable read!!!

Wow!!! And I mean really WOW!!! This is one of the best fics I have ever read!!! Really!!! I\'m really into fanfiction but just recently started reading original fics and it surprised, in a pleasant way, to find something this good. Not only the characters but the plot line and ryhtm \"smelt right\", hahahaha. Seriously, it was a joy to read your work and don\'t stop writing, you seem full of ideas and imagination.

Thanks for the story, it really warmed me.
neusuchan

Oh, wow.
This was so good. I can\'t begin to be coherent...mostly because it\'s now 3:00 a.m. - and I\'m going to hate myself when my alarm clock goes off in a few hours...but I simply HAD to finish reading Blurring the Lines.

I can\'t wait to read more of your work!