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for Blurring The Lines

by flintywoman

person Merry Christmas!
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! First of all Happy Christmas! Second of all, awww I love your fics so much! They really make my day. Third of all, I'm really sorry for asking but pleeeeeeeeease please please please can you keep Blur on here for just a bit longer than the first? It royally sucks because I'm at my dad's girlfriend's house in Cheshire right now and I'm using her computer to type this, but on Wednesday, I think, we're going to her other house in Abersoch (Wales, in case you were wondering.) and there isn't a computer there at all, and my own laptop doesn't have an internet connection yet, so I won't be able to read Blur while I'm there. On top of that, I don't think we even get back until the second or third, so I might be too late to catch it. I really want to read it again because Blur is one of my favourites that you've written, so please can you keep it on for just a bit longer? It'd mean the world to me.
Thankyou,
Katerina
xxx
P.S. poor Toshi needs some TLC, ne? :)
person Mystic
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, I'm finally reading it. Amazing, really. It took me about three times to get past the first few paragraph. I'll admit it, the first bit of the story didn't interest me. But I know your stories and I know your writing and I even know how wonderful and original they are. So, I read it. By the third paragraph I was hooked. I hadn't expected it to be like this, but I'm so glad I finally decided to read it. I come to AFF to mainly check your stories and I occasionally check your web site. Your characters are so engaging and I can't get enough of them. You've probably had people say this before, but it's so true. Your stories are truly works of art. I don't leave reviews for just anyone--especially long reviews. But you deserve it. I know and I can see that you've worked hard on these stories...all of them...and I think you deserve to have someone tell you that they are thoroughly entertaining, passionate, and wonderful. When I read them, I get lost in the stories, in the characters. It's amazing, really, because writing like yours does not come around often. Thanks for all of your great reads!
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I JUST GOT MY COPY OF VOLUME ONE!!!!! ^^ In time for christmas! I was so excited. I squeeled and snatched it off the table and danced around the kitchen clutching the envelope to my chest. << You don't want to know how excited I got after I opened it.

I OWN IT! WOOT! Portable Sarah! *dance, happy, SQUEEEEEEE!*
person Sarah
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you, I love your stories. I'm going to buy your Blurring the Lines book. Good luck with your writing! ;D
person Big Bad Trombone Monster
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I thought you were re-posting all of this one again one last time! Please do! I read it the first time and I can't remember if I left a review or not *sweatdrops* but in case I didn't I just want to say that I think you are amazing. Of everything I've read, and that's a heck of alot of stories, all of yours are my favourites. I think my best friend wants my voice box taken out because I keep talking her ear off about how cool you are! Seriously though, pleeeeeeeeeeaaase put Blur up again! It will benefit the whole of humanity........somehow....Yeah! No one'll ever be bored again because they'll all have your fics to read! And I want to read it again before I spend an inhuman amount of time looking for somewhere to buy it. Pretty please with double whipped cream, extra raspberry ripples, chopped nuts and chocolate sauce, and a cherry on top. *glowers* One of my other friends used to make me say that if I needed a favour. Whoa, that was like two or three years ago now that I think about it. To be honest, he hasn't changed much. Hee hee, but that's beside the point. I think you're becoming like my own Yuki Eiri. Sorry if that sounded a little weird. But please, please, please. I'd love you forever.
See you, space cowboy (that line kicks ass!)
The Bi....oh I can't be bothered to call myself anything weird today.
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH! It\'s going into PRINT?! As in, A BOOK?! :D Wow. You\'ve just made my day a little brighter.
person darkangel1210
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Ooh! Hurry up and update I love this plot!

darkangel1210
person kaeli
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY...it has me captivated, your wording is very well versed...entranced by the way your setting the story it made me actually wonder if i/s\'s actually exist...good job..keep going
person twisting in the wind
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait a minute...now I have to buy the book to read the last three chapters because I failed to download them yesterday?? WTF? If you\'re going to use this site as a teaser, you should have at least give fair warning in your disclaimers from the start. I think your stories are some of the best I\'ve read here or anywhere, but *nobody\'s* good enough to put up with this kind of bait and switch.
person Flintywoman
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry you\'re angry. This story has been posted for almost a year and was buried. I\'d happily have it buried in the catagory but to remove chapters puts it back in the rotation. I\'ll remove it totally if it offends your sensiblities and if I\'ve offended anyone, simply do not read my stories. I left the three chapters up because it was requested I leave as much as I can still posted. Can\'t please everyone, it seems. I\'ve worked very hard to put this story together, hired and paid for a professional artist and left the full file up as long as I could. I believe I have been fair, I\'ve said time and again that when it goes to print I have to pull it and mentioned at the start of every story since this one to go back and read my other posted novels. In a year\'s time I\'ve completed and posted 3 full length novels, almost four with near daily updates. Be angry if you wish if you feel I\'ve been unfair. (And you know, if you\'d asked nicely I might have sent you the file to read but apparently I\'m not not good enough to make you put up with such horrible bait and switch.)