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for Blurring The Lines

by flintywoman

person sky
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. keep it up!
person Zephyr
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grovels at your feet* Another update and another wonderful chapter! You, my friend, are approaching god-hood in my mind!

Anyway...this was a wonderful chapter! The very end, with the sake and the couch....brilliant. I can\'t get over how well-written this story is! I absolutely adore this story. I can\'t wait for the next update! Hopefully chapter 5 will be as quick as the other four!

**Zephyr**
person sky
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story and i cant wait to read what happens next.
person Zephyr
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another fast update! Thanks! And thanks for that little bit of info on Toshi-san. The hollow of his throat, eh...

I really loved this chapter. Again, can\'t wait to see the next one! This is great!!
person Kaiiz
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great start to the story. I wasn\'t sure if this was my type of story but Toshi hooked me right in. I hope you will start going into more detail about the I/S, I would love to read more about them:)

Can\'t wait for the next chapter! Update soon :D

-kaiiz-
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it will get, ahem, steamier. Not sure how the ratings go on these things but it\'s listed as \"R\" right now. Consider this fair warning, things won\'t be staying that way... Thanks again for reading everyone!! Sarah
person Shannon
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I love it. Please write more, I can\'t wait to see where this is going.
person Boo
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It makes me happy. Yay.
person Zephyr
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the fast update! I\'m loving this story! I can\'t wait to see more of Toshi-san. He\'s so mysterious and yet almost child-like at the same time. I love it. Can\'t wait to see the next update!!

*Zephyr**
person jayne
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so0o good!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!!! i can just picture toshi and mick and i loved Andy in the beginning.... o0o and i love alec too.... man these characters are great! cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!