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for Blurring The Lines

by flintywoman

person V
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I adore Andy as well. He\'s such a flambe and reminds me of this guy I went to school with. Except Andy\'s tamer than my old school mate( scary, but true!) I hope Toshi does okay at the club. The upcoming info gathering scene really has me on edge, so I hope you don\'t give my fave couple too much grief at the club!
person Zephyr
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm...maybe I should just save myself some time and cut and paste \"wonderful!\". Really. The plot thickens and I love it! You can feel the tension in their relationship as they work to solve this crime. And I love how you only use intimate moments when they\'re needed. Most authors would freak and think there has to be something in every chapter, but I love how you keep it real. Yet another wonderful chapter from you. As usual, I\'ll be waiting anxiously to see the next one! ;)

**Zephyr**
person kay
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a really interesting story .. i love the plot!!!.:> .... keep withing...please...
person V
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear this story gets better with each chapter. It\'s like one of those flaky biscuits that you peel apart layer by layer, wanting to make the buttery goodness last while fearing that it won\'t. Yet it does! Each layer is as good as the last one, yet better than before because you know it will end soon. Heck with being friends with Alec, I\'m willing to be the maid just so I can have a front row view of this trio interacting with each other!

I guess I\'ll have to settle for the story since this way I can see some of their thoughts. Afterall, I doubt Alec would let a mind-reading, yaoi-obsessed, empath maid work for Toshi. A girl can dream though!
person V
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Toshi and Mick are now my favorite fiction couple. They are just so cute together. I need to read more! Oh, and where can I find a best friend like Alec?
person Flintywoman
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello,

Zeph, thanks again! Glad you\'re all still digging it. =) And V if I knew where to find friends like Alec I wouldn\'t have to make them up. LOL Hmm guess that\'s not working =P Anyway, I\'ll have a new chapter up tomorrow day before I wander off to do chores. Currently working on Slash set in the old west... they aren\'t being as nice as Mick and Toshi were... meanies. Sarah
person Zephyr
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww! *GLOMP* That was so cute! It was hot without being smutty. \'Tis a rare thing indeed for that to happen! This story is absolutely beautiful. I still love how you\'re not rushing their relationship, how you\'re giving them time to get to know each other and understand each other before they become lovers. Absolutely wonderful. I\'ll be on pins and needles waiting for the next update!!

**Zephyr**
person sky
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story.
person Zephyr
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay!! I love you! I love this story! Pretty please get the next chapter up ASAP! I\'m dying to see the rest! Absolutely wonderful, as always!

**Zephyr**
person A.
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story... i love how you keep switching there personalities... I thought i could perdict there characters but then you threw in their emotional baggage and made the story much much better... keep updating... thanks.