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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Perfect ending to the chapter! Very nice! And if we didn\'t love Toshi before (if there are any of those people out there...) we do now! I get the feeling this isn\'t the last of Sal, though...
Yet another great chapter. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. You\'re so good at keeping us on the edge of our seats, begging for more! Great, wonderful, superb!
**Zephyr**
Yet another great chapter. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. You\'re so good at keeping us on the edge of our seats, begging for more! Great, wonderful, superb!
**Zephyr**
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! And in the club!! Very nice! I never expected it of Toshi! Wait...when he\'s with Mick, I think I understand. I really loved it! I love where you\'re going with this story! I can\'t wait to see more! Great chapter! You know I\'m going to be checking again after I get off work at midnight, just in case you updated again! ;) Great job, as usual!
**Zephyr**
**Zephyr**
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story... the several story lines are great attention holders... please keep updating quickly...
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w0w.... you are quickly becoming my god...... this is so0o0o0o0o0o0o good!!!! but that sal a new one!... okey... i cant wait for a new chapter!!!!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just read my review... and it made no sense...**sleep deprived.... but thats okay.... i need another chapter.... iand i forgot what i meant to say... \'scept that its realllyyyyyyy good!!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! CLIFFHANGER FROM HELL!!!
That\'s just evil, hon. Like you\'d do that to me!! I can\'t handle it! For the love of God, please update ASAP!
Damn. Now I\'m going to be hitting Refresh every hour or so to see if you\'ve updated...
Oh. And I sent you an e-mail. I do answer!! Sometimes...LOL
Anyway. Need I say it? Another great chapter! Except for the evil cliffhanger...;)
**Zephyr**
That\'s just evil, hon. Like you\'d do that to me!! I can\'t handle it! For the love of God, please update ASAP!
Damn. Now I\'m going to be hitting Refresh every hour or so to see if you\'ve updated...
Oh. And I sent you an e-mail. I do answer!! Sometimes...LOL
Anyway. Need I say it? Another great chapter! Except for the evil cliffhanger...;)
**Zephyr**
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I am loving this entertaining ficcie to pieces. You\'re characters are very complex and easy to fall in love with; the plot has pretty much everything I look for in a fic. Action, psychology, angst, mystery, and wondrous smut make for an engrossing read. Nice job, looking forward to more from you.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need i say it, another great chapter. I am now literally on the edge of my seat trying to figure out what will happen next. please don\'t leave me in this state. Update soon.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! No sooner do I hit \'review\' than another chapter is up!
Well...same thing goes for Chapter Ten as Chapter Nine. Wow. I\'m liking the imagery of Toshi and Mick\'s outfits. Can\'t wait to see what happens at the dance club!! ;)
Hmmmm...if I hit \'review\' again, will Chapter Eleven pop up magically?
*hits review and rushes to see*
Well...same thing goes for Chapter Ten as Chapter Nine. Wow. I\'m liking the imagery of Toshi and Mick\'s outfits. Can\'t wait to see what happens at the dance club!! ;)
Hmmmm...if I hit \'review\' again, will Chapter Eleven pop up magically?
*hits review and rushes to see*
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Zeph, I tried to send you an email but you never answered... sniff sniff, pout cry... lol I\"m an email slut. No one emails me so I\'m always begging for mail. Open invite.... anyone? hello? this thing on? LOL I\'ll try to have another part up tomorrow. Thanks again everyone for reading my smut! Sarah