rate_review Reviews

I like it, so very very hot and intense.

Sorry of the fact that I cannot review you more often... ^^; I don't have acess to my account, if you click the link of my name on the first review you can see that my profile don't show... >> Anyways, I love this story! This is really neat, I really thought that you would keep it as a one-shot and was really disappointed...

Sincerly,
Marigold...

Jesus. This story was incredible. Harry Potter scam or not. This story made me so *ahem* wet. << >> Anyways... please
keep up the story and update soon it was great. Oh and Harry Potter sucks no offense to any Harry Potter fans it just does.

Im sorry that your story was a scam. Is that what you said? Well I dont mind, I despise Harry Potter, and Im glad that I read something like this. Keep writing more and ill keep reviewing ok!

i like it please update soon,

Your a Harry Potter fan aren\'t you? :Smirks: Or maybe, your friends and family are.

Well great story, however, I do not think using Lillian Evans was very different from Lily Evans. You could have at least changed her eye color or something, this can be called plagiarizing.

But the story was good and original, so I guess that counts as something. I think I\'m gonna vote you are a four star. (For plagiarizing J.K Rowlings work. I would have given you a five star if you had written a disclaimer.

Sincerly,
Marigold

It had great detail. I love how you were able to give both their point of views while they were makeing love. Very good. Keep up the good work.

I hope youre going to continue!