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by MoChroi

person Anna Belle
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did you know that use the word lover in chapter one 82 times. it's anoying with all the repetition.
person Apollo
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an evil place to stop :(

However, I am enjoying the story, and can\'t wait to see more of it ^.^

Apollo
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...very interesting. You do indeed grasp the air of that eram but then...I expect no less. I do have one serious complaint, though. WHY HAVE YOU NOT CONTINUED THIS?? Oh, wait...there is another. *glare, glare* How could you?? You could you paint our beloved Ireland in such a dark, dreary light??????!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'m soooooooooo wounded!!
person Apollo
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful start! I can\'t wait to see where this goes and what the bride is going to be like...Ooooo, so many choices!

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