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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Please write more stories like this! I read it over and over again, can\'t get enough of it! More more more!!!!!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I think a little less dialog and a bit more naration would be nice, but this is pretty good.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! Please, more sir.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW: THAT was great!!! I wonder how far can he go. please update soon.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiiice stufffff.
-Groans hotly.-
-Groans hotly.-
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She was easy to break, but who could hold out when you have a powerful man filling your very soul. Okay that is the extent of my literay prowess. I love this story, I had to go back to the first chapter to remember, after that though it all made sense. Can't wait until you update.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is fucked up.but i like it i guess.update soon
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Hot.
Not usually my cup of tea, but-yikes. Very arousing, and you write well.
Please check out mine and give me a review, if you would be so kind.
(Under "Unfabulous")
Thanks
Not usually my cup of tea, but-yikes. Very arousing, and you write well.
Please check out mine and give me a review, if you would be so kind.
(Under "Unfabulous")
Thanks
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good start, and I really hope that you update soon!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm.new chapter anytime soon? like it