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for Ever Hope

by cukid9

person tilly
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you\'re awesome... i love ur story... i want more of a love triangle tho...
person Jen B.
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story. It is killing me to wait for this next chapter. This last chapter, particularly has me on edge.
person Betty
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello
I like your story I hope you keep on writing, But I wonder who will she end up with Niicolas or you the hot prince that she love i\'ll just have to with and read.

\"Remember you keep on writing and I\'ll keep on reading\"
Sayonara
person Alila
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always your story/update is superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love ya! Alila=3
person Alila
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, godd, good, good, good!!!!!!!!! Is it going to be a treesome? *evil laughter* I really think your writing have improved, because the story kind of slowed, without losing it\'s drive or details. In fact, I think that you managed to make the story even better.. First time I read it, it was mostly because of the girl. I felt it was kind of poor girl growing up, but now I feel I know Aino. She has weaknesses and strenghts. She is a girl with dreams, that experience her first love, but may to get it. Also you are not writing in a predictabel way, which I am grateful for. This gives the story a twist and drive. There are a lot more to tell, but I don\'t have enough time.. Anyway, good luck with the writing! Cheers Alila
person Keisha
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying your story so far... do i sense a love triangle?... do the love triangle!
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Keep writing! I\'m so excited to see where you take the story next.
person anon.
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Thank you for putting up two chapters at once. Keep up the good work!
person Alila
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! Don`t make me cry!!!!! =3 This piece is so good, that I can`t find a word worthy to describe it!!!!!! Love ya, and keep it going! Alila
person Alila
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This get better and better!!!!!!!! Man, I am going to lose my mind for longing after a new chapter!! Please save me*laughter* Alila