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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOTHING BUT THE BEST FROM YOU AS ALWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Luv ya=3 Alila
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY I <3 you, for onces its not a cliffie, i guess it was worth the wait *kicks the ground admitting defeat* of well still can\'t wait for the next one
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I\'m happy that Aino and Jalo can be together without her frying him.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those 2 chapters were awesome... haha... i kinda like some jealousy from Ensio...
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo~! *throws my hands up and prances around excitedly* This chapter-... golly gosh, I\'m simply...
This story rocks something vicious!!! Which is a good thing!! ^_^ lol! Ensio and Aino... *hums happily*
Yeah, do I really need to say more?? I love how you describe things- it\'s easy to picture, but not
so descriptive that one is ready to bang one\'s head into the wall because it\'s too wordy.
it\'s perfect!
“I am not yours, and I will never admit defeat to you,”
Wow, do I ever I.D. with THAT line. I actually have said the whole, \"I am not yours.\" bit. Of course,
my line was delivered with the toss of a book at the respective male\'s head, but hey! Who\'s keeping track?
*bright smile* It\'s very, very fun to be on the \"outside\" watching Aino\'s lovely trip down the Nile river...
denial, that is. yeah, that was corny. It happens.
It\'s much more fun to SEE/READ about it happening, because you can call the character eight types
of idiot, and make fun, gripe, and generally harass the character about the whole denial issue safely.
I much prefer this *waves my hand* to the real life, in your face situation. It blows.
But you captured it perfectly. I give you a 10 out of 10!~
Whoo! And traitorous thoughts can sometimes be the very, very best. and the most fun!
Thanks for the update! I eagerly (and, sadly, I patiently) await another update! :P
~Belrix
This story rocks something vicious!!! Which is a good thing!! ^_^ lol! Ensio and Aino... *hums happily*
Yeah, do I really need to say more?? I love how you describe things- it\'s easy to picture, but not
so descriptive that one is ready to bang one\'s head into the wall because it\'s too wordy.
it\'s perfect!
“I am not yours, and I will never admit defeat to you,”
Wow, do I ever I.D. with THAT line. I actually have said the whole, \"I am not yours.\" bit. Of course,
my line was delivered with the toss of a book at the respective male\'s head, but hey! Who\'s keeping track?
*bright smile* It\'s very, very fun to be on the \"outside\" watching Aino\'s lovely trip down the Nile river...
denial, that is. yeah, that was corny. It happens.
It\'s much more fun to SEE/READ about it happening, because you can call the character eight types
of idiot, and make fun, gripe, and generally harass the character about the whole denial issue safely.
I much prefer this *waves my hand* to the real life, in your face situation. It blows.
But you captured it perfectly. I give you a 10 out of 10!~
Whoo! And traitorous thoughts can sometimes be the very, very best. and the most fun!
Thanks for the update! I eagerly (and, sadly, I patiently) await another update! :P
~Belrix
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have i ever mentioned how much you rawk
still mean for your cliffies
still mean for your cliffies
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so enjoying your story. It is killing me to wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please tell me i didn\'t piss you off, i really didn\'t mean too, please jsut write more PLEASE!!! im begging you *gets on knees and begs*
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I`m sorry that I couldn`t review sooner, but I have kind of been busy! Thanks for the chapther=) I want to say that I actually love the cliffhangers because they make me thirst for more..(he, he....: like a vampire) Anyway I feel that those cliffhangers shows that you`re a damn good writer! The reason? Well, a good writer is supposed to make the reader want to continue the story, and by ending a chaphter with a cliffhanger you make the reader want to know what`s going to happen next in the story.. (puh.. long sentence there..) I think it`s very important, and especially when it comes to uncompleted stories.
The update is superb! I kind of feel that Aino has grown on her experience, and I feel sorry for Jalo because it`s obivious that he loves her. Niikolas was an interesting fellow, and my gut feeling tells me that I`m going to sees him again. Ensio is kind of intersting and scary, because clearly he got great powers and he doesn`t act like a normal human being. I simply adore the twist where Aino is in Ensio`s grasp, because for once she`s not in charge when it comes to men! Not that I don`t like her to be feisty and everything, but it`s funny to see how she handles to be a \"weak\" female! Good luck with the update! Love ya, Alila
The update is superb! I kind of feel that Aino has grown on her experience, and I feel sorry for Jalo because it`s obivious that he loves her. Niikolas was an interesting fellow, and my gut feeling tells me that I`m going to sees him again. Ensio is kind of intersting and scary, because clearly he got great powers and he doesn`t act like a normal human being. I simply adore the twist where Aino is in Ensio`s grasp, because for once she`s not in charge when it comes to men! Not that I don`t like her to be feisty and everything, but it`s funny to see how she handles to be a \"weak\" female! Good luck with the update! Love ya, Alila