rate_review Reviews

My dear, I don\'t think you realize the talent you possess. Your writing style rivals that of Terry Goodkind and Sarah Douglas. You should be proud. The story is proving to be an in-depth character study that has me more intrigued by the plot than what the smut scenes would be like. If I was your editor or friend, I would demand you to get your work published as soon as possible. I also know that you are maybe only a quarter through the book or perhaps a third depending on the size of the novel. I reckon this would be a great story to begin a trilogy but I guess we\'ll just have to see where the characters lead you. So well done. I can\'t wait for you to write more although I know what it is like to have writer\'s block and how frustrating it is to put thoughts down on paper. Good luck with everything and I will hopefully be reviewing another chapter in this delectible new story of yours.
~Sandra~

Excellent. There\'s nothing more to say... looking forward to reading the next chapter....!!

lol, no i love the story, it was a bad week, and you made me feel happy lol.
you do good work.

Woa! This is absolutely fantastic!! i just wish you\'d describe this world, people and their customs a bit more precisely. but this story is really great, i\'m impressed.
keep up the (very) good work!

just what i needed lift my spirits

grawr, thats not very nice, all this time just to have another cliff hanger, and by the way, if i am ever slow to comment, becuase you know i will comment with every chapter, i no longer have internet at my house, which is grrr.
and yes i ramble with everything

BRILLIANT! AWESOME! WONDERFUL! etc. Thank you for saving my sanity! *laugh* Lots of love from Alila

its been soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long since you updated, when will you update? please update? im beggin you update? ill make you my god for a whole minute.

Oh, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! Please please please write more!

Wow...I think you did a pretty good job with the ending...But that\'s just me I guess. I\'m not sure if they had gotten together before or not, but I am so happy to see that Aino and Ensio got together! Yay! So anyways...UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEASE!