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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, now that I have read it again I recant my previous criticism...the last chapter is the only one that I would like to know more about what Aino is feeling...but I suspect that is because it was a big one...lots went on...and I just want to know what is going on in her head, why is she assimilating so well...I know I wouldn't be. I can't wait to find out who the Ice man is...and I get why he's jealous of Jalo...so yeah... it's going to be so great! I can't wait...I'm practically salivating. :)
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is... brillant !! Very well writting ! I'm just disappointed for Aino can't love his prince... snif ! snif !
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I swear I have read this like 3 times in the last 24 hours, and each time I notice new things that I like about it. what will it take to get a new chapter. (I am not above bribes...:) )
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. It was a pleasure to read, and I am desperately hoping for more soon! :) I love the characters, they are very complex, but accessable. I like this world that has been created, and I cannot wait to see what secrets will be revealed in the chapters to come.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!!!!!! Where Is The Rest Of It????
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to say that I LOVE both of your Fantasy stories and I hope you continue them soon!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. Very well written.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written
I\'m getting more and more enthralled with it as each chapter goes by
Keep up the great work
I\'m getting more and more enthralled with it as each chapter goes by
Keep up the great work
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!! WHEEE!!!1
YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!! WHEEE!!!1