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for Ever Hope

by cukid9

person lovecups
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, now that I have read it again I recant my previous criticism...the last chapter is the only one that I would like to know more about what Aino is feeling...but I suspect that is because it was a big one...lots went on...and I just want to know what is going on in her head, why is she assimilating so well...I know I wouldn't be. I can't wait to find out who the Ice man is...and I get why he's jealous of Jalo...so yeah... it's going to be so great! I can't wait...I'm practically salivating. :)
person miles
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is... brillant !! Very well writting ! I'm just disappointed for Aino can't love his prince... snif ! snif !
person lovecups
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I swear I have read this like 3 times in the last 24 hours, and each time I notice new things that I like about it. what will it take to get a new chapter. (I am not above bribes...:) )
person lovecups
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. It was a pleasure to read, and I am desperately hoping for more soon! :) I love the characters, they are very complex, but accessable. I like this world that has been created, and I cannot wait to see what secrets will be revealed in the chapters to come.
person shana
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!!!!!! Where Is The Rest Of It????
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to say that I LOVE both of your Fantasy stories and I hope you continue them soon!
person anon.
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. Very well written.
person Kaida WyndRyder
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written
I\'m getting more and more enthralled with it as each chapter goes by
Keep up the great work
person fraser
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person fraser
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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