rate_review Reviews

Oh my god... I loved this story :) It made me smile at some parts and I was crying at the last chapter :( Thank you so much for writing it ^^

i hate that this was a sad ending
(n)
i didnt expect her to end up with jalo again

Great story! It's really involved, but I enjoyed it a lot. The conflicting emotions within all of the characters were such a great muddle that was done very well.

/sob
... i fricken cried when ensio died. i was really banking on him not dieing!! awww... that was an AMAZING story even if it didn't end how i wanted it to... T~T why'd you kill him??? would it be too presumptious of me to ask for an alternate ending? haha you don't have to if you don't want to. anyway i really recomend you try to get this published. i must say this rivals, if no surpasses, a lot of the fantasy books i've read. this plot line would make a wonderful trilogy

omg. that was one of the greatest stories i have ever read. it has taken me three weeks to read it because i've only been able to read it during class. I love it. please tell me there is a sequel.

You do love your mysterious men don't you. I like Ensio...even if he is apparantly bad news...he reminds me of Aoshi in one of my favorite anime. I think that this just gets better and better. Why doen't Aino wonder about her dad though? Anyway...keep it coming please... :)

:) I liked it. I like the progression that Ensio's character has taken. I also really enjoyed the legend and the bit about the rain not being natural there...and I am happy...and sad...with Aino and Jalo's relationship...they are very real people in these chapters...I like it. I just want more of it :) Oh! and as always the duals are fantastic...both on the dualing grounds and between the sheets. :)

oh wow. well, things are starting to get interesting. i can't wait to read another chapter. please update this story very soon. Thanks.

Ja-Ne =^_^=

oooohh....I loved it. I think Aino is definitely rounding out. :) I loved the end fight scene, and I also really liked the scene in the crystal...loved the descriptives in that sequence. I was so enthralled. Ensio is a really cool character....I can't wait to find out what will happen with him. I love how you first introduce your characters. You don't make the mistake that a lot of people do and just give out a laundry list of the characters attributes...you throw out little bits of chum...and make us wait...it is very effective. Thank you for the speedy updates....I really do check to see if you've updated every day :). (If bribes are required I could be persuaded to give up my first born child in exchange...when I have it :)

*Sniffle*...but I like Jalo....I wanted them to be together....*Sniffle*....but besides that I really enjoyed it. I would like to know a bit more about what she is thinking...the way she percieves certain instances...maybe describe things a bit more completely...then it would totally suck me in and I would feel like I was there...I got there a bit when she was learning to fight with the new weapon...those sparring matches were done really well, also with the cavern dream sequence...that was very very well done...and I do like that morning scene in the third chapter...it was really enjoyable...so you are right to leave it I think. Thank you for the updates...and I will happily supply you with bribes if you update again soon...like...well right now would be best...'cause..yeah..I need a fix. :)