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for I love the Rain

by Elizabeth777

person Asher
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Should I hunt someone down and kill them for making your poem start like this?

Tell me how you want them to die and I\'ll do it, I\'ll even save the body parts you want.

I love the rain too, but you shouldn\'t have to hide your tears with it, I wish I could hold you in my arms right now and let the rain drench us both and give you some happy reasons for loving the rain.

Don\'t let the water put out your flame, My Flame.

Wind
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the rain too.......
person BakaNeko
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Trying to make me into a waterworks?
I loved it, its so sweet and sad and....

waaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit... this isn\'t about me, is it?

Just kidding... maybe :-D

B.