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person bodanger
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for an update this story is awesome
person Shadi88
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice begining, am reading the rest now.

Butterfly Beauty
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I've read the first four chapters so far and I like it. I don't know if it means anything but I can really see you in your story. I enjoy how the dialog is smooth, it feels like the characters really know each other well. O I also enjoyed the Dante's Inferno Reference. I am a huge fan.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's interesting, but it was a bit of a quick jump between the date and the kidnapping
person hiryu
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. That's one of the few stories here that managed to draw AND keep my attention. Maybe because the characters seem natural. Waiting for more.


I loved the "largest cookie-cut group of individuals" remark ;)
person Aryah
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, wow that was thus far pretty fucking cool. I can\'t wait to see where it goes from here. Please write more soon!!!!!!