rate_review Reviews

NOOOOO so close to hot steamy real sex and Alton has to think of that dick Alan. ::whispers:: Alan must die! Opps that was supposed to stay in my head. Nathan you keep trying!! He\'s giving in!!

I love this story! Update as fast as you can and let Alton forget that Allan creep and make him (alton) and Nathan make hot sweaty love! ^^

// Tadashi Shimisaki

*Smacks herself* Bad reader. I should have reviewed when I read the first chapter (and the parts up to this point), but I\'ve been lazy. Anyways, I like the premise of this story, yet the speed in which the characters meet up was a little too quick for me. I hope you slow this down a little or it\'ll feel too rushed overall. More plot, a little less sexual tension (wow, did I just say that?)

I\'m sure things will be amusing when the truth actually manages to come out. Keep up the good work.

CP the PMSy

Wow, that was some kiss! I was actually sitting here and cursing Nathan for blowing that. Yes, i was actually muttering \"Nathan you idiot. You blew that. Why did you have to do that. You moron!\". Although I do like the way he pulled his bacon out of the fire. So to speak. He\'s right too; Alan doesn\'t deserve Alton. Yeah, I actually said \"Damn straight\" when I read that.

I\'m so glad you\'ve already got this written out. The wait for a newly written chapter might very well make me nuts.

Now I wanna see how Nathan deals with Alan!

Kat

i have to say that at first glance-ness, i was a bit wary...like, as in the first few paragraphs of ch. 1...
...but i LOVE IT!
heh.

continue the lovely-ness, please?

Dude! I am seriously in love with this story and i cant wait for the next chapter! I got my friend into it too! YAY! she loves it also!

::giggles:: aww they are so cute together not to mention that the plot is so very original that it is most intriguing! now for the hot steamy real sex!

wow... This is one of the best well written stories i\'ve read on here in quite awhile. I can\'t wait for the next installment.

NO!!! XD Don\'t stop there! XD Eeeh!!! ^^;; I\'m exciiiteeed to know what happens next!!! XD

I LOVE IT!!!!