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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... So many great stories lately. I\'m giving out compliments like crazy to every random author I see, but that\'s because just about every story I\'ve read in the past... what, 3 weeks or so was so good, and this is no exception - on the contrary - This is just... great. I couldn\'t spot any mistakes, the writing style was clear, fluent, flowing and... intoxicating. Damn your plot, its just so good and captivating. Ace. Write more, continue this beast. Or else :D
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, okay, so I already cheated and know how it\'s going to end, but I know how people adore reviews and such, so I HAD to review! It\'s progressing nicely and in a realistic manner which is nice! Dunno if I said this, but I love the flawless transition from one scene to another, that\'s one thing I know I need to do, I get caught up in a scene and keep going ^.^ But anyways, wonderful work, keep on posting as you can!
Apollo
Apollo
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap!!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!!!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles* I love big, evil plot twists like this. Now it\'s all complicated and let\'s see how long it takes Alton to spill the truth when he\'s confronted with his lie. Write more, soon?
CP the pained
CP the pained
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you!!! I read that Gravitation story (that you so unfairly had removed) almost a year before this story was even posted! Unless you have this story on another website or wrote it before then, you plagiarized that author! I really loved that story and now I can\'t find it... Yours is almost exactly the same, so of course I like it, but I don\'t understand how she/he (><) could have it up first and have stolen it from you....
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
K... What do You need to write every day?! :)
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a wonderous devil and I hope to any and all gods you keep writing. This is wonderful! At first I didn\'t think I\'d enjoy it, didn\'t seem like my usual thing, but hell, you kick ass! Oh I hope you finsh this soon! X______x it is soooo good! Like a drug. Visual crack, you demon. But I love it, never stop. Please?
~Mally~
~Mally~
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
niiiiiice .. i love the update.
i cant wait for numero 6
i cant wait for numero 6
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yippee for updates. I love this story. like i\'ve told you before.. this is one of the best stories i\'ve read in a while.... thank you for writing it... impatiently waiting the next chapter.