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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(too lazy to sign in...) WAI!! Update! I totally love this story, and I think Alan\'s a jerk.... I mean, if he only want an intellectual relationship, why doesn\'t he go off and marry a dictionary or something, instead of making poor little Alton unhappy!!
Oh, and how old are Alton btw? In chapter one it said that he and Mark was 35, but when Nathan met Alton he was described as someone in his age, 25. I just wanna know which is true. Baibai and update! Ps:You\'re making a TERIFFIC!! fic!!Ds
//Tadashi Shimisaki
Oh, and how old are Alton btw? In chapter one it said that he and Mark was 35, but when Nathan met Alton he was described as someone in his age, 25. I just wanna know which is true. Baibai and update! Ps:You\'re making a TERIFFIC!! fic!!Ds
//Tadashi Shimisaki
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two words for you: TOO FAST! I said that once before, but it can really apply to this chapter as well. The whole thing is moving along way too fast. I know you probably want to get to the smutty, lovey-dovey ending or something, but could you slow down with the plot? I don\'t think it would be that easy to just forget that someone lied to you like that. Just my two cents of course, take them or leave them.
CP the frustrated
CP the frustrated
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I \'ve been putting off reading this until it had more chapters and now I\'ve read it at the cliffhanger part. You MUST update!!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh alton you need a \"balanced\" lifestyle! dump the alan dude! and then you can remind nathan of his freaky stalker way and use it to blackmail him to do all sort of things... like, things...
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To- Lunapokema,
I\'m sorry you feel the way you do. However, I was well within my rights to get the Gravitation story removed as it was a product of plagerism of MY story. Although you have read that bogus version a year before you read this one here on AFF, please take the time to read my author\'s notes before making unnecessary acts of libel against me. It clearly states within the first few sentences that this story was originally posted on other fictional archives. In fact, it was a WHOLE YEAR AFTER *I* had posted the original of this story up before you-know-who copied and pasted up her version up on those other websites. What does this mean to you exactly? I published the COMPLETED STORY on October 1st 2002 on one site, and November 25 2002 on another. That\'s *2002* girly. YOUR PRECIOUS STORY wasn\'t posted up until November 28th *2003*. And I know this because I have it scrapbooked in my computer to read for kicks and to show to my friends so that we can have a good laugh over it once in a while.
And obviously I have proof of ownership of this story as I would have been required to provide such information to the various webmasters before they would remove the bogus version. And assuming your email works, I will indeed mail you this needed proof to ease your self righteous mind.
I\'m sorry if I sound like a complete prick, but I\'m sick and tired of seeing and having original work stolen by people who can\'t write worth a damn. I\'m even more sick and tired of seeing close minded people like you going around and sticking up for these story thieves.
On second though... I\'m not sorry at all.
I\'m sorry you feel the way you do. However, I was well within my rights to get the Gravitation story removed as it was a product of plagerism of MY story. Although you have read that bogus version a year before you read this one here on AFF, please take the time to read my author\'s notes before making unnecessary acts of libel against me. It clearly states within the first few sentences that this story was originally posted on other fictional archives. In fact, it was a WHOLE YEAR AFTER *I* had posted the original of this story up before you-know-who copied and pasted up her version up on those other websites. What does this mean to you exactly? I published the COMPLETED STORY on October 1st 2002 on one site, and November 25 2002 on another. That\'s *2002* girly. YOUR PRECIOUS STORY wasn\'t posted up until November 28th *2003*. And I know this because I have it scrapbooked in my computer to read for kicks and to show to my friends so that we can have a good laugh over it once in a while.
And obviously I have proof of ownership of this story as I would have been required to provide such information to the various webmasters before they would remove the bogus version. And assuming your email works, I will indeed mail you this needed proof to ease your self righteous mind.
I\'m sorry if I sound like a complete prick, but I\'m sick and tired of seeing and having original work stolen by people who can\'t write worth a damn. I\'m even more sick and tired of seeing close minded people like you going around and sticking up for these story thieves.
On second though... I\'m not sorry at all.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO Alton NOOOOOO!!! Dump the jackass, and go get yourself some fireman meat ::grins wickedly:: Oh and did I mention that you need to update more!!! What will Alton do now that he nows the truth! NO MORE CLIFFHANGERS!!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! That was so sad! So much angst and drama! I can\'t wait to see the next update! I\'ll be watching for it!
**Zephyr**
**Zephyr**
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story! Update or I\'ll poke you with my stick of doom!! Update, you hear me? UPDATE!! // Tadashi Shimisaki
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I\'m so glad you\'re revising your story or else i would have never gotten the chance to read it.
It\'s really wonderful and so well written! I also love you\'re characters.
I wander what the hell is wrong with Alan... am i wrong to feel that he\'s not interested in men, women or any person above the legal age limit?
Please update soon.
I\'m so glad you\'re revising your story or else i would have never gotten the chance to read it.
It\'s really wonderful and so well written! I also love you\'re characters.
I wander what the hell is wrong with Alan... am i wrong to feel that he\'s not interested in men, women or any person above the legal age limit?
Please update soon.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I\'m so glad you\'re revising your story or else i would have never gotten the chance to read it.
It\'s really wonderful and so well written! I also love you\'re characters.
I wander what the hell is wrong with Alan... am i wrong to feel that he\'s not interested in men, women or any person above the legal age limit?
Please update soon.
I\'m so glad you\'re revising your story or else i would have never gotten the chance to read it.
It\'s really wonderful and so well written! I also love you\'re characters.
I wander what the hell is wrong with Alan... am i wrong to feel that he\'s not interested in men, women or any person above the legal age limit?
Please update soon.