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Awww! They\'re in love! Now how cute is that?

I honestly love this fic. I\'m always looking forward to your updates.

Can\'t wait to see what\'ll happen next!

awwwwwwww ... thats so sad.
amazing way to end the chapter.
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Aww! Cliffhangeeeeeeeeer! XDDD

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

ahh yeah!! glad it\'s working out! now all we need is for alton to dump alan! looking forward to your next update!

thats hott! lol! I am glad to say im in love with this story! Its brilliant!

What a beautiful chapter. I loved how it developed. Keep writing (or if I understand correctly, revising - is this story already finished?).
I know this is a very artificial-sounding review but it\'s only because I\'m in a hurry right now. Will probably write a better review next chapter.

Awwwwwwwwwww!!! That was so sad! Alan\'s a jerk. Alton just needs to ditch him already!

*sigh* I want a guy like Nathan...

Okie. I\'m done drooling! Great chapter! I can\'t wait to see the next one!

**Zephyr**

Oh my God!!!! Chapter 6 was fantastic, but why did you stop the action? You should have let Alton get some because he needs it more than anyone else. Going out with someone for 10 months, I think that\'s what you wrote, and getting nothing other than a pathetic, almost brotherly kiss should build up some unhealthy tension that needs to be released. The outlet was there and he let it get away. I hope Alan is meeting with him to break-up. I get no positive vibes from them as a couple, and for them to stay together would lead to misery. Anyway, I think you\'re doing a great job with this fic so far and look forward to reading some well deserved action for Alton in the future!

GAHHHH! I luv this story to bits!! What\'s gonna happen with Alton and that jerk boyf of his? What? What? What? More please, soon!