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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please please upadate soon, I love this story!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, Alan is a dick, Alton needs to tell Nathen that he loves him. Alan is standoffish, a snob, bad with children, shallow, and how do you not notice your boyfriend doesn\'t seem to be ok with the \"itelectual relationship only\". If he tries anything with Alton, Alton should slug him and go after Nathen!!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soooo good! soooo sweet! soooo romantic! sooooo pationet!!! soooo great!!! neeeeeeeed more!!! eep! ur a great writer! i am really enjoying this!!!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh.. nooo. so close. I can\'t wait for the next chapter... you\'re such a talented writer...
This is one of the only stories I read that don\'t constantly have spelling/grammatical errors. Thank you for that.
This is one of the only stories I read that don\'t constantly have spelling/grammatical errors. Thank you for that.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please for the love of everything that is is good in this world, please write more! OMG I love that fic, rite more and often as you can, I am hooked lol. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!!!!!!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheh, whoops, kinda type too fast. But yeah, i loved the story, the plot, everything. I have read a lot of sash fanfics, and many of them just got to the good parts, but I love the way you took your time in showing us how it all came about. i have no problem with the way the story trangressed, and so, please write more on it. I have this saved to my favorties so that when you update I have a direct link, lol. So please update as quickly and often as you can. :D
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO Nathan Go Back He Loves You!!! Too much angst go back to hot and heated ;)
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story filled with twists and turns, laberinthian in scoop and design truely a wonderful read I do hope you will update soon, This emo story has truly captured my heart
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Oh wow! Dayum, this is just getting better and better!
But Alton let him go!!! He let him walk away! Idiot! Ohhhh but how he growled and snarled. That was so much fun! And I knew Alan was a dip! *bangs on the table* I knew!
Ah, can\'t wait to see the confrontation between them. This ought to be interesting.
Sorry the reviews were late and I think I didn\'t get a chance to review chapter five. sorry.
Kat
But Alton let him go!!! He let him walk away! Idiot! Ohhhh but how he growled and snarled. That was so much fun! And I knew Alan was a dip! *bangs on the table* I knew!
Ah, can\'t wait to see the confrontation between them. This ought to be interesting.
Sorry the reviews were late and I think I didn\'t get a chance to review chapter five. sorry.
Kat
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very good