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for The Phone Call

by Kaiiz

person Kathryn Coll
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Loverly ending! *cackles* had me going there with the \"waiting for a phone call\" though. Damn, I\'m gonna miss Nathan and Alton. They were fun! *sighs* I so wanted Alan to be more of an ass, but you went and made me feel kinda sorry for him. Dang. *smirks*

Great job. I\'ll keep my eyes out for more stories from you!

kat
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful simply wonderful
person Love to be Anon
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::starry eyes:: Aww if only real life could end so romatically...::begins to cry:: but now the story is over and there will never be another story with the two loved birds ::brightens up:: unless you make a sequal...didn\'t they both want children ::wink wink:: Anyways, sad it\'s over but it was WAY awesome!!
person Fan Girly
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was soo sweet I absolutely loved it and i loved the way the epilog was written i kept thinking it must be Nathen!! Great story!
person V
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I\'ve always wondered how the original story ended. (I\'ve read the ones that were copied from you) I have to say that I like the original better, but that\'s to be expected, right? Great story and great ending.
person DraculUnknown
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!Cute ending!!!!I fell in love!! haha! Ok!! Im sad! thats all? Now i have nothing to look forward too reading after boring old school!! NOO!what am i to do? thats like all I do!! well, ill have to tell my friend that it is done, right?she\'ll want to finish it,too.LOL! anyway! GREAT STORY!
person Divinitylost
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sad to see this story coming to an end
person desperatedesire_maliciousintent
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I bet I know what he\'s going to do.... and I can\'t wait.
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic seems strangly familiar...its good though!
person Kaiiz
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"...This fic seems strangly familiar...\"

^_o

*I think I\'m gonna cry...*