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for The Phone Call

by Kaiiz

person aimee
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, just wanted to tell you how much i love your story. i did originally read it ages ago over on a gravi website not realising it was stolen until i came across this just now so i thought i should compliment the actual author! plus it works so much better as an original. but well... yeah... i loved it. its a good idea, has a good plot that was set out well and overall excellently written. ^^
person Chrysler
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe, i love Nathan\'s persistancy during their \'date\' So cute. I\'m also glad Alan and Alton maintained a friendship. I had a hard time explaining the plot to my sister seeing how their names sound alike and all. I loved their phone converstaion, that was just too sweet. Adorable ending.
person Xtreme17nc13
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I started reading this when you first started posting it, but I didn\'t finish it for some reason. I just read the entire thing and I have got to say that I\'m disappointed that I didn\'t finish it the first time. This was really great. It was funny, sweet, and hot during all points in time. I fell in love with your characters, even Alan. You did a wonderful job on this. Do you have anything else written? I\'d love to read it. Toodlez! --Ashlee
person Brekke
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story very much! Great job! ^_^
person cin
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very very good story!!!!Thank you for writing it!!!
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was extremely hot + a very good plot! Loved it!
person Loki
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great I loved it a wonderful sweet love story with just enough spice keep up the good work . And thank you for taking the time to write and share your story. I hope to se more of you work. [signed]Loki
person Stone
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was lots of fun! i really enjoyed it and i think i\'m gunna see what other stories u\'v got hidden there..*wonders off*
peace ^.^V
person shin
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.


though until the break up i thought you were going to make alan a bitch.
i think you should have.
person supergirlanna
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is just... it\'s just amazing!!!! so sweet so confuzzeled so pationet! beautiful work!

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