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for The Phone Call

by Kaiiz

person knockhead
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah oh baby~ *drool* i want more please!
person Pussycat
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that kiss!

Love Nathan\'s boss telling him not to help out. That was just hysterical! Alan suddenly leaving town... you know I still wonder about him. Ohhhh and Mike, that was sweeet!!!

Damn, I can\'t wait to see how Alton deals with those kisses!
person mandy
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like ur story so far. this is actually the first one that i have started reading besides the ones that my friends have writen and posted. update soon plz
person Shedding Ink
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. Seems like a little rushed for three characters but I still like it. Looks like fate wants them together. What odds are there of meeting the person of a misdial, yet alone someone you had phonesex with, and meeting them.. was it the next day? Still I like it. So far at least. Don\'t make me eat my words.
person Perona
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo...I hope you continue with this story. It\'s interesting so far and I like Nathan and Alton\'s characters quite a bit.
person 2
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked ure story...
person jaynie
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you going to continue this?!
i really hope so.
person Pussycat
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I\'m so glad I \"tripped\" over this story. I really like the premise and so far the story is just fun and dammit, it\'s really good! I can\'t wait to see where it goes from here, especially after Nathan\'s claimed to know Alan. I\'m still not sure I like Alan anyway... he just sounds a bit \"off\". Not wanting Alton, not calling, it almost seems as if he\'s hiding something.

Okay, okay I know. I gotta wait patiently. I promise to try!

Kat
person nea
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an extremely enjoyable fic. I loved the second chapter as much as the first. Are Alton and Nathan going to get together? If they do get together, will Nathan tell Alton about the phone call? Hopefully you have Alton and Nathan become friends, have Alan be in an affair with a woman, and have Alton run into Nathan\'s arm after hearing about it. Or you could have Alton cheat on Alan, maybe a fling with Nathan that becomes more, because of Alan\'s inattention to Alton\'s needs. Anyway, whatever you do I\'ll be waiting to read more. You\'re doing a fine job so far, so keep it going.
person Anonymous
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that sucks. I really, really like this story, and I wish I hadn\'t of first read it thinking that the person who posted it on Mediaminer was the author a few months ago. It\'s well written and interesting, and I adore the plot. I enjoyed it, and I\'m glad I never left a review to the person who plagiarized you.